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Thanks Cassandra -- you make an important point about writers not collaborating with readers. Which always strikes me as a missed opportunity to establish a connection through a story.

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Thanks Carrie!

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Thank you for this. I've been thinking a lot about adjectives lately! Many books I read for my book club are full of them. The feeling I get reading these books is that the writers aren't interested in collaborating with the reader. It reminds of this essay that I find so interesting, which expands on why "leaving things out" is valuable: https://fictionwritersreview.com/essay/making-room-for-the-reader-lessons-from-the-magus-by-john-fowles/ 🖤

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Love this. Now I am looking at my writing with fresh eyes.

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